SquizofrenicCat's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Peacock]

Incredibly cute design for the character; Nice color work, as well. I'm digging the background, too. Though, the cigar effects seem like they were a little bit rushed. Amazing work, nonetheless.

[Wheatley done lost his eye]

Most of your forms in this lack consistency. Wheatley seems to be multidimensional while the cube remains stuck in a frontal 2D position, which contrasts with the other elements, without mentioning that it's completely disproportional as the borders to it vary in size and shape and have a really screwed up sense of depth.

The knife (I'm assuming that's a saw knife or something) is also looking pretty poor, as the handle is very small brown and doesn't seem to be neither wood nor plastic. I don't know if the knife being all twitchy was on purpose or it was poor lining of your part. It doesn't look threatening and it looks incredibly generic and bland, as the saw spikes to it go all the way over to the handle in a straight line and just sort of floats there attached to the bones. Again I don't know if wheatley looking like a deflated soccer ball was intentional or if it was just you doing a really shoddy job on the lines.

The tentacles also need work, the bigger one being the reasonably good one but still lacks the proportional harmony of itself, as it has a big second base but suddenly loses space between lines. The interior of it also loses the perspective around the first time it gets disconnected for multidimensional purposes. Though, props to you for making the interior stick out of the base and give a nice looking effect to it, despite all the problems. I wish I could say the same about the other ones, but that's just not the case. The intestines hanging out from the what it seems to be leg bones also don't look very threatening and seem to lose track of their own dimension by disappearing behind it. The color work is also incredibly basic as there are no shades or light source whatsoever, with a red filter in front of everything.

Just keep on doing stuff and try to make individual, good looking objects before jumping straight into scenarios with more than one item. Try to perfect the act of creating consistent and straight objects plus their depth within the image and you'll be on the right path to making something legitimately creepy. This just looks awkward.

SerPounce responds:

>done for art jam
>done in hurry
>done in a lot less time than most shit for art jam was

[Art Critique Comics]

Aw come on, her work isn't that bad. I've seen a lot of senior people do much worse..

[Jokes]

I could recognize your style from the first panel, man. Your work has got a lot of style into it, and always manages to get a good laugh out of me. Great work!

ToonHole responds:

I'd trade it all in for some fashion style, any day!

[Remember when Pico did drugs?]

Fernando is looking a little bit too sane for my taste. Still great work though.

[Peacock]

This is absolutely adorable. I love the little motion she's doing, it pretty much sold the picture for me.

The only odd thing about it is the puff smoke, it seems a little bit like it is coming out of her armpit at first glance. The transparency for the trail was a little bit over done.

9/10 5/5

[Glorious Leader]

This is unacceptabru. Where are grorious leadar archangeru wingus? Where is mighty machineru-gunnu fire sword? And where are the pantsu?? Fix, fix immediatry!

idiot-monarch responds:

shamefur dispray

[HERP]

Muito bom! O tracado das sombrancelhas, das orelhas e do interior da boca estao impecaveis e bem definidos. O sombreamento tambem esta otimo!

PegasuTV responds:

Valewe ms esse rabisco eh velho pra poha vo tenta refazer essa kaceta.
bacana ver br no niugraonds

[Thor]

Thor will beat the sickness out of you!

[Disposable Loli. 04]

I'm admittedly surprised at how much affection you've shown towards your character, the situation as a whole is fascinating. You made a "porn" flash series based off suggestions from the public, and from that you built a story over rescuing that loli from that whole perverted mess. This is somehow heart-warming to say the least.

I'm not sure if I'm missing the point in your work, but I really liked the way it went either way. It's just another level of progression, other than just being wanking material.

AKABUR responds:

Well, you got it exactly right, and I could have not summarized it better. Thank you for a short but accurate review ;)