Rando did nothing wrong.
Rando did nothing wrong.
Very nice things, and the thing in the middle does particular things to my good thing detector.
I really like their designs, the pointy shapes on the suits are very fun to look at. The dracula-esque shirt collar on Lione is great, but his tie is a mystery to me.
thanks duckie! :D! i was thnking it would be a super low tie, like he didnt care enough to tie it back up properly.
Very nice of you to include your pet human in the portrait, really adds to it!
She can certainly bend hard rocks, her stance says that much!
This is a pretty fun loop, the smears are well employed and the tail ring getting properly constrained by the tail is a nice touch. There's something extremely lively about that stereo that I can't point out, it's very charming.
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Seeing doodle Bitey being an actual character coming out of the ball pit brought me both great joy and insurmountable fear. Nice job on striking a balance with the font vs handwritten, it's much easier to follow now.
I also like how the background color of the panels are appropriate for the immediate mood they're in (darker for formal, bright blue for seemingly peaceful, red for violence with the blood spilling out of the panel, white-ish for innocent); it makes the whole thing very easy to digest at a glance even though there is a lot of wild stuff going on.
I'm particularly digging the coherence/structure in these 2 pages so far, and also the fact the beige cat (Bitey?) showed she isn't an unsalvageable cunt after all.
The last 6 panels, to me, were as if her facade of looking tough/disconnected as a defense mechanism against most bullshit in her gross world (depicted in other strips) finally came down crashing. That, or the sedatives/blood loss took their toll on her adrenaline bank. I like them either way.
I know the handwritten text might be an actual thing you wanna do, but you may want to consider turning your handwriting into a custom font to save time and keep consistency, as it can get difficult to read at times currently.
Yeah, Bitey's the beige cat. And thank you! Your insights are far above the scope I feel my comic occupies, but I appreciate it immensely. I've always felt that the handwriting was always a rough point and my own bad handwriting habits leads to a lot of inconvenience (both for writing and reading). Thank you for finally pushing me to make a font, I kept putting it off. So look forward to that. Thank you again.
I like the coy look on this one, very puffy clothes. Shoes look uncomfortable though.
It's spelled arcade bumstead, iirc.
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