freakin' friendly fire dude, composition on this one is real nice. good job with the movement
freakin' friendly fire dude, composition on this one is real nice. good job with the movement
thank you so much duckie!!!!! :D
I like the armor and outfit, it's all very detailed. I'm assuming she's an elf cause of the pointy ears and smug look.
Unfortunately I'm having a hard time discerning line width; the reason this matters is because you've clearly made a pose where some things are closer to the viewer (like the dagger and her right leg), but the similar line width across all parts betray this effect of proximity. If you work a bit on varying that a bit more, with thickening of lines as things get closer and thinning them as they become further away, I find it would make your poses stand out way more.
The colors and shading are very nice also. It makes it a very easy to digest design.
I *really* adore the linework on these. Yes, it's not perfect if I zoom in like a prick, but taken how the composition of the set consists of a lot of things to be taken in at once, it absolutely evens out. For instance, in this one there's the manly hands galore, the dynamic poses, the detailed outfits, the expressions, the background; it's all kept very easy on the eyes to soak in as opposed to simply feeling busy/overwhelming.
I'm not sure how long it took you, but seeing as you've effectively made a 5 piece long set of these whilst keeping consistent quality without destroying your wrist I need to give it kudos; great job man.
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It's not age, it's experience! Love me some old Joseph. You gave him a really nice expression and the battle tendency/bloody stream color palette is a very nice touch.
I feel the arms look a bit on the short side, his right arm in particular since it is meant to be ahead of him. Hermit purple also seems a little more like tentacles than vines, maybe cause they aren't making sharp enough turns and the spines seem pretty short. Still a pretty sweet broseph regardless man.
I like the linework and the fuzzy fur details around curves, coloring/shades are nice also. Sadly her very human like face strikes the uncanny valley a bit too hard for me. I can't provide much on how to fix that since I do not know if it's an intended aesthetic choice, but I can say it is there.
Thank you for your honesty! I can say the uncanny valley effect wasn't intentional, unfortunately, but the goal was definitely to humanize/anthropomorphize these pokemon characters while still retaining their animalistic details.
Again, thank you for your honest critique. I appreciate it!
I really like the lineless look on this one! The different shades work really well together.
On top of that, I dig how everything fluently moves around a little, making the composition rather hypnotic. She looks like she is having a good time as usual, so it is quite a lovely sight overall (even if her intent may lean on the nonconsensual side a bit).
Also, I only just noticed you changed the color of her ears to grey since her debut! That changes some stuff for me :)
Great job!
Damn that gun shoots the whole bullet; that's like 70% more bullet per bullet!
I feel there's a bit too much brain, it doesn't seem like a self-inflicted wound from that angle.
This is reinforced by how his expression is pretty empty like he was about to sneeze, missed a chance to tell a story there.
I like the colors and the outfit though! The perspective on the anatomy is fun too.
thank you for this criticism!!!! i will take these into account for my next gore pic, especially since i have another one planned with a similar premise.... thank u again duckie, i really really do appreciate it!! <3
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I've always loved how she pretty much always looks like she is fine, despite whatever is happening to her at a given time. That's been such a strong point to me about her and you always depict it really well.
The 2019 and the corner details being gutted body parts was a great touch. Very happy to see her again.
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