SquizofrenicCat's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Blow Me Paws P5 (PATREON COMIC)]

I really gotta preface this with how I'm not the biggest bondage/noncon fan out there, but the way you've been laying out this comic is top grade regardless, and I can't help but simply appreciate it.

The designs are adorable and energetic. The pacing is sincerely pleasant and makes excellent use of a brief amount of pages to portray the character personalities (with Willy being an impulsive Gremlin, and Josh being prudent yet still a guy who exposes himself). Backgrounds are done expertly, telling quite a bit about the environment with their details, then naturally replaced with simpler panels to let the characters take the attention as things start to develop.

I don't think I have to bring it up since it's basically your expertise, but the facial expressions and body language are a total treat. The first 2 panels on this page for both characters are some of my favorite.

All in all, great job with this project, man. I hope to be able to give my support to hard working and good humored people like yourself soon, but in the meantime I can at least reinforce it by saying that what you're doing is fantastic regardless of our kink barrier.

OddJuice responds:

Thanks man, you're a sweetheart. It's nice to see such an in-depth review. Know that when I write my comic I hardly have bondage/non-con in mind, that's usually a side thing. I think about the characters and setting first, much like I would with any other story.

The bondage aspect is going to be a little more prominent, you'll see, but I really do think if you're telling a story about the characters FIRST and the theme AFTER everything can be contextualized, forgiven and, to a degree, even enjoyed by people who usually despise it.

It's why I liked Jurassic Park as a kid. Hated the hell out of horror movies (I was quite a scaredy-cat) but Jurassic Park fooled me because it hardly felt like an horror even though it quite clearly had predominant horror elements.

You don't need to support me in any way other than this, man. I really do put a lot of thinking into these things and here and there seeing someone who realizes it? Makes it worth it. Thanks a lot for the in-depth review, it was a pleasure reading it.

If you ever have critiques or would like to address something that might need improvement don't hold back. I'll do my utmost best to follow through!

[horse knighty]

freakin' friendly fire dude, composition on this one is real nice. good job with the movement

nillaaa responds:

thank you so much duckie!!!!! :D

[DnD Character Art]

I like the armor and outfit, it's all very detailed. I'm assuming she's an elf cause of the pointy ears and smug look.

Unfortunately I'm having a hard time discerning line width; the reason this matters is because you've clearly made a pose where some things are closer to the viewer (like the dagger and her right leg), but the similar line width across all parts betray this effect of proximity. If you work a bit on varying that a bit more, with thickening of lines as things get closer and thinning them as they become further away, I find it would make your poses stand out way more.

The colors and shading are very nice also. It makes it a very easy to digest design.

[Ingrid, Bianca & Jackie (1/5)]

I *really* adore the linework on these. Yes, it's not perfect if I zoom in like a prick, but taken how the composition of the set consists of a lot of things to be taken in at once, it absolutely evens out. For instance, in this one there's the manly hands galore, the dynamic poses, the detailed outfits, the expressions, the background; it's all kept very easy on the eyes to soak in as opposed to simply feeling busy/overwhelming.

I'm not sure how long it took you, but seeing as you've effectively made a 5 piece long set of these whilst keeping consistent quality without destroying your wrist I need to give it kudos; great job man.

[rox gets her ass kicked]

1 𝙃𝙄𝙏s 𝐒𝐔𝐏𝐄𝐑 𝐀𝐑𝐓 𝐅𝐈𝐍𝐈𝐒𝐇 (𝟑𝟑𝟓𝟎𝟎 𝐏𝐓𝐬)
𝘊𝘈𝘛𝘍𝘈𝘕𝘎 WINS

[Old Joseph Joestar]

It's not age, it's experience! Love me some old Joseph. You gave him a really nice expression and the battle tendency/bloody stream color palette is a very nice touch.

I feel the arms look a bit on the short side, his right arm in particular since it is meant to be ahead of him. Hermit purple also seems a little more like tentacles than vines, maybe cause they aren't making sharp enough turns and the spines seem pretty short. Still a pretty sweet broseph regardless man.

[Crim's Boobs]

I like the linework and the fuzzy fur details around curves, coloring/shades are nice also. Sadly her very human like face strikes the uncanny valley a bit too hard for me. I can't provide much on how to fix that since I do not know if it's an intended aesthetic choice, but I can say it is there.

MVGrarra responds:

Thank you for your honesty! I can say the uncanny valley effect wasn't intentional, unfortunately, but the goal was definitely to humanize/anthropomorphize these pokemon characters while still retaining their animalistic details.

Again, thank you for your honest critique. I appreciate it!

[Giggle Wiggle]

I really like the lineless look on this one! The different shades work really well together.

On top of that, I dig how everything fluently moves around a little, making the composition rather hypnotic. She looks like she is having a good time as usual, so it is quite a lovely sight overall (even if her intent may lean on the nonconsensual side a bit).

Also, I only just noticed you changed the color of her ears to grey since her debut! That changes some stuff for me :)

Great job!

[Check his pulse!]

Damn that gun shoots the whole bullet; that's like 70% more bullet per bullet!

I feel there's a bit too much brain, it doesn't seem like a self-inflicted wound from that angle.
This is reinforced by how his expression is pretty empty like he was about to sneeze, missed a chance to tell a story there.

I like the colors and the outfit though! The perspective on the anatomy is fun too.

nillaaa responds:

thank you for this criticism!!!! i will take these into account for my next gore pic, especially since i have another one planned with a similar premise.... thank u again duckie, i really really do appreciate it!! <3

[Aidy retro space officer]

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