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Sometimes that extra mile makes a whole lot of difference!

Well this is kinda messed up, kinda very slow paced and agonizing to watch cause of the scatter focus of detail. I suppose that's part of the idea behind it, though.

I like the reaper entrance, pretty spooky and dramatic. A few touch ups on character anatomy while keeping style consistent would go along way in providing immersion for the message you are trying to give out.

You already have the hard part of delivering a point down in my opinion, so just keep goin!
I also don't know why this is tagged as Trump.

For a 1 week assignment this is excellent.
Great job with the color scheme and character design! The shadows and blur were very well used; Interesting "cliff hanger" as well. I found the music fitting enough.

This could be pretty decent with some more work, add some sounds maybe if you're not going to add more frames.

Sadly I can't vouch for it in its current state.

Pretty cool stuff man, my favorites were around 0:46; solid anatomy and perspective/turn around studies. The old tests were pretty nice as well, you seem to have frame by frame down for the most part.

As we are speaking animation though, I'm not sure how you connect different things into your work to give it life, so I suggest making a short if you want actual critique.

If I were to look at this as a movie it is kinda lacking since there's a lot of silence and empty space. Could certainly cut down on some of that silence and add some audio; it's not because this is a experimental reel that you can't make it efficient or even interesting on its own.

Cristalflake responds:

Thank you so much!! Actually, its silent because the first animatic was with some copyright music, so i took it off, but didn't added nothing else (im kinda dumb too)
Also, thanks for the tip! I'll try to make some shorts too to add here!

Love me some anthropomorphic aminals!
Very nice expressions and colors, the jump cuts were on point! You have a cute voice, too.

Amazing stuff! The character design is REALLY good, I like the fluid animation too.
Maybe the script could use some better pacing, a lot of downtime between delivering meaningful parts of the story and I find that's very dangerous for a pilot.

Besides that, I feel Gramps voice lines have a bit of distortion on them? Not sure if I'm tripping on that. Either way, keep up!

This was pretty good and funnily animated, you're a great singer man!

Though the animation was a bit unsettling at points when I really wasn't expecting it. Not sure if that was your goal or not, but I can't say I liked that.

The animation on this is nothing short of fantastic, very creative too!

Sadly as it has been pointed out the Voices are rough and demand the need of Subtitles, or perhaps they could be redone so they are clearer sounding.
We have lots of talented VAs here on Newgrounds, so you could consider working with them sometime, but that's obviously just a tip.

There's also a lot of dead space in the video due to the editing (a minute of nothing), perhaps a trailing voice file as I can hear some shifting before it ends.

I really like the sync at the start and the frame by frame, the character design is very nice too.
However I couldn't understand what happened at the end there, this looks like a WIP overall.

Sadly I can't be vouching for it in its current state.

Tabuley responds:

can't blame you haha, it's just a dumb shitpost for twitter that I thought i'd try to upload there as well.

This isn't a bad intro actually, but it doesn't really classify as a movie of any sort.
Upload something including it next time.

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