I don't know if you read these or if you even care, so I'm just gonna leave some bullets rather than spell it out.
Positive:
- It's really well made. You've been doing these for a while. Congrats on your perseverance.
- The dialogue was of outstanding audio quality and felt believable.
- The atmosphere you went for is certainly there.
- There's significant length, and it did not feel like it was dragging on any particular part.
Negative:
- It's gratuitously gross, for no particular reason. High quality just makes it worse.
- Watching this felt like an endurance test. I gave it a chance and did not enjoy it.
- I have no idea how you get away with this being rated T, as there's clearly violence, gore, sex (zoophilia?), references to sex, references to suicide, and god knows what kind else of Body Horror you sprinkled in there.
- I'm under the belief you placed a jumpscare in there, for free. To me that just nails that this piece is meant to be hostile to the viewer.
- The consistent change of pace as well as disturbing imagery in pretty much every scene snuffs out any sort of possible message someone reasonable would like to convey; if the viewer isn't here for the shocking content (which is not tagged) then it's a lot of nothing.